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Some things I wrote tonight. - Turtle - 02-29-2004 "Broken Life" Broken life, Shattered just like a mirror, Over a person she thought she loved. Abuse from they, hurt more then any blade. Piercing past the heart into the soul Thousands of pieces, Still refelcting the same person, Crying thousands of times, Showing pain in every image. "New One" An upset girl, Laying on her bed, Thinking of things, Swirling in her head, Wondering if she's worth it all, To put up with all of the suffering, To be with her boyfriend. She loves him so, Even though he believes otherwise, Wishing she would be noticed, By the one that supposedly truly loves her. Keeping the pain in, She waits around for all of life, To see if the boy will notice her, And love her, The way she deserves, Instead of all the abuse. "Nameless" Lost without a cause, A hopeless fade, Swirling around, Hoping for a new beginning. Reliving the harshest times, That have happened over the years, To get a better view, For the next life. Fading of the brightest, Dulling of the shiniest, Leads the life, Of the person, Without the soul. I got bored so I wrote all of those. Took about 10 minutes for all of them together. They aren't my best, just I haven't written in awhile. Some things I wrote tonight. - DragonLady23 - 03-01-2004 wow just 10 minutes? Very nice!! Some things I wrote tonight. - DragonLady23 - 03-01-2004 Closed Doors Subjected to torture, Intensified Bruises of love and care. Open wounds, black eyes. Frail hypoventilating body crouched in a corner governed by a figure who has betrayed her trust. A worthless human who showcases his anger, frustration, anger. She swears her love for him. Forgiveness exempt. Till death do us part. ~Who Or Die~ Lift your head look to the sky close your eyes can you see me? can you feel my harsh grip? the grip you will never escape ears blister nose dissolves feet empolde next you die!! no one cares you look at me and you finally realize what you thought was false you are but a mirror image of my reality and pain the truth set you free... Some things I wrote tonight. - Turtle - 03-01-2004 Nice DL. Yeah, I'm a speedy writer anymore. I wrote like 3 more aftewards. Some things I wrote tonight. - Wanksta - 03-02-2004 I got a couple... All thats Left: The time has come The day of all to come He gave his all But didn't make it On the cold dirt his body lie Everyone trying to give him life And before he gets a chance to say good-bye Lonely his body die. Nothing Wrong: When the day was young He woke up to a morn of devastation No one left but the ones he loved The sounds at the window They've come for my beloved They've entered Left none alive Lonely he stays Sitting in the corner by himself He takes the knife by the end And then in a pool of red he lay. Devastation Woke up in the early morn The room bathed of gold Going to what was to be a day A day in which no bad could come When he reaaches his destination He finds that the one he loves is gone He mourns for hours Friends cheer him back to his senses He goes about his bent day Until he finds that all of his hard work is destroyed Falling deeper into a void of darkness He lets go, He makes his decision He goes... These are some I've done over this last year...may seem kinda dark...dont know why i wrote them. Some things I wrote tonight. - DragonLady23 - 03-02-2004 very nice wank |