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i forgot to write a topic title - FreeFall - 05-11-2004
With this glass god right beside me
labelled, stickered, and sold
The only way that it reads me
is the only way that i'm told
Ya, there's a mouse in my stomach
and he's singing strong
It's got my head spinning
and my mind is gone
He's laying on his back
and so am I
I'm gonna wash this back
this dirty cry
It's gonna fight back
and so am I
But i'm gonna wash this back
while it sings it's dirty songs
With this last sip there's a waterfall
Drowning my day
And the people who surround me
aren't here to stay
but hell, give me reason
why should they?
and hell. give me a reason
to get through with this day
it's actually a song I wrote. . it continues a bit basically repeating 1 or 2 of the verses with modifications, but i decided to just write out the basis. . .I'll give you a hint. I wrote it while I was drunk (ie. tonight. . I planned out the instrumental structure of it all, I just don't feel like posting a couple pages of text)
i forgot to write a topic title - Annatar - 05-12-2004
looks like grunge to me.... sounds alright tho.
I would a happy happy ska ska song up but would seem somewhat out of place.