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Un-named - Shalk - 08-18-2004 This song is writen by my friend so he will get the credit, i want u guys to tell me what u think about it how much longer shall i mourn for my mistakes a daily ritual in which i lamentate living our life through a fence the razors and barb run through my flesh the halo of my blood which the ground now wears shall await the generations for a life of despair your body is laid on the mellow ground cold and white, overturing my company with your sleep draw i shall, a wreath with blood stained fingers a laurel of water, so deep mist ridden coldness lingeres around drives us into cravings of the sun no warmth or light just darkness of night as fire into winds of north we are denied and broken of force sleepless, painless shall i stride guard and watch your soul drink your enemies blood as red wine await the next world for your awakening © Noam Un-named - Annatar - 08-24-2004 nice.... im imagining this as a fairly heavy track... tell me if im wrong. Lacs a central theme as such, thus in my mind more of a poem than a song. but what do i know. |