Some things I wrote tonight.

[Turtle]

"Broken Life"
Broken life,
Shattered just like a mirror,
Over a person she thought she loved.
Abuse from they, hurt more then any blade.
Piercing past the heart into the soul
Thousands of pieces,
Still refelcting the same person,
Crying thousands of times,
Showing pain in every image.


"New One"

An upset girl,
Laying on her bed,
Thinking of things,
Swirling in her head,
Wondering if she's worth it all,
To put up with all of the suffering,
To be with her boyfriend.

She loves him so,
Even though he believes otherwise,
Wishing she would be noticed,
By the one that supposedly truly loves her.

Keeping the pain in,
She waits around for all of life,
To see if the boy will notice her,
And love her,
The way she deserves,
Instead of all the abuse.

"Nameless"
Lost without a cause,
A hopeless fade,
Swirling around,
Hoping for a new beginning.
Reliving the harshest times,
That have happened over the years,
To get a better view,
For the next life.
Fading of the brightest,
Dulling of the shiniest,
Leads the life,
Of the person,
Without the soul.



I got bored so I wrote all of those. Took about 10 minutes for all of them together. They aren't my best, just I haven't written in awhile.

[DragonLady23]

wow just 10 minutes? Very nice!!

[DragonLady23]

Closed Doors

Subjected to torture,
Intensified Bruises
of love and care.
Open wounds, black eyes.
Frail hypoventilating body
crouched in a corner
governed by a figure
who has betrayed her trust.
A worthless human
who showcases his anger,
frustration, anger.
She swears her love for him.
Forgiveness exempt.
Till death do us part.

~Who Or Die~

Lift your head
look to the sky
close your eyes
can you see me?
can you feel my harsh grip?
the grip you will never escape
ears blister
nose dissolves
feet empolde
next you die!!
no one cares
you look at me
and you finally realize
what you thought was false
you are but a mirror image
of my reality and pain
the truth set you free...

[Turtle]

Nice DL. Yeah, I'm a speedy writer anymore. I wrote like 3 more aftewards.

[Wanksta]

I got a couple...



All thats Left:

The time has come
The day of all to come
He gave his all
But didn't make it
On the cold dirt his body lie
Everyone trying to give him life
And before he gets a chance to say good-bye
Lonely his body die.


Nothing Wrong:

When the day was young
He woke up to a morn of devastation
No one left but the ones he loved
The sounds at the window
They've come for my beloved
They've entered
Left none alive
Lonely he stays
Sitting in the corner by himself
He takes the knife by the end
And then in a pool of red he lay.


Devastation

Woke up in the early morn
The room bathed of gold
Going to what was to be a day
A day in which no bad could come
When he reaaches his destination
He finds that the one he loves is gone
He mourns for hours
Friends cheer him back to his senses
He goes about his bent day
Until he finds that all of his hard work is destroyed
Falling deeper into a void of darkness
He lets go, He makes his decision
He goes...


These are some I've done over this last year...may seem kinda dark...dont know why i wrote them.

[DragonLady23]

very nice wank