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This song is writen by my friend so he will get the credit, i want u guys to tell me what u think about it

how much longer
shall i mourn for my mistakes
a daily ritual in which
i lamentate

living our life
through a fence
the razors and barb
run through my flesh

the halo of my blood
which the ground now wears
shall await the generations
for a life of despair

your body is laid
on the mellow ground
cold and white, overturing
my company with your sleep
draw i shall, a wreath with
blood stained fingers
a laurel of water,
so deep

mist ridden coldness
lingeres around
drives us into cravings
of the sun
no warmth or light
just darkness of night

as fire into winds of north
we are denied and broken
of force

sleepless, painless
shall i stride
guard and watch your soul
drink your enemies blood
as red wine

await the next world
for your awakening

© Noam
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#2
nice.... im imagining this as a fairly heavy track... tell me if im wrong. Lacs a central theme as such, thus in my mind more of a poem than a song. but what do i know.
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