08-11-2003, 04:01 PM
I have been working on a book for many many years. Its no where near close to being done. Its very rough and I still need to go through it to pick out errors, fix things, add things and stuff like that.
I am posting a few parts that will not give away the plot of the book, but I will say that out of all the books I have ever read, I have never seen anything like this. I won't say more then this and I won't say how how I came up with the idea because that would actually give away the plot also.
Here are a few points to remember....
A) I sucked in english class, I hated being there
B)This is still in the draft stage where its being written and re-written by me
C) I have NEVER shown this to anyone before, nt even my best friend of 22 years has read this yet.
D) I'm not even close to finishing the book. I have 205 pages down, with another 91 pages of plot ideas down
E)This book will have lots of stuff in it... Magic, Tech, Dragons, Mechs (robots), love, hate, death, life, wars, twists and turns. As I said I have never seen a book like this before.
So before I chicken out and delete everything here in the forums, he is parts from my book...
Warning its a long read...
I am posting a few parts that will not give away the plot of the book, but I will say that out of all the books I have ever read, I have never seen anything like this. I won't say more then this and I won't say how how I came up with the idea because that would actually give away the plot also.
Here are a few points to remember....
A) I sucked in english class, I hated being there
B)This is still in the draft stage where its being written and re-written by me
C) I have NEVER shown this to anyone before, nt even my best friend of 22 years has read this yet.
D) I'm not even close to finishing the book. I have 205 pages down, with another 91 pages of plot ideas down
E)This book will have lots of stuff in it... Magic, Tech, Dragons, Mechs (robots), love, hate, death, life, wars, twists and turns. As I said I have never seen a book like this before.
So before I chicken out and delete everything here in the forums, he is parts from my book...
Warning its a long read...