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The mis-adventures of captain amazing!
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An existance brought up of the mind
creating consequence to cross the line
in the depths of my own self and soul
Form these walls and watch them grow
Just to bring it down

Step back and feel this will
to see outside, erase that line
regressing thoughts in fleeting time
Temp it, feed it, let it fill

This body holding, showing me
There's more than this world to see
Those four walls keep eyes blind
Deconstruct them to unbind
Just to seal up again
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#2
love that second verse.

Not so sure about the first and third, did you have to use consequence or deconstruct??
EEEEXCEELLEEEEEEENNT!!
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