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A poem cloudfuel gave me.
#1
Cloud made this for me for school. Hope you like it.
A Tree.
A tree,
So sweet, so mellow, and often bland
Can sometimes become a nuisance and get out of hand
With leaves blowing here and pines falling there
It’s a wonder so many people seem to lovingly care
About a tree,
That is said to be so harsh with its brutal winds
What with knocking things around, tearing things apart, but I guess it all depends
On a tree,
That gets in the way with its enormous roots breaking things down
And jamming up the earth while we all hang around
A tree,
That causes more pain than pleasure
But just for good measure
Let's look at the good and the bad
All of the aspects which can make one go mad
Oh wait what was it that we need in order to breathe?
Oh yeah… A tree 
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#2
Uhhh let me rephrase that:

Slashy asked me to help him write a poem.. so I wrote the first thing that came to mind... it should be read as follows:

A Tree

A tree,
So sweet, so mellow, and often so bland
Can sometimes become a nuisance and get out of hand
With leaves blowing here and pines falling there
It’s a wonder so many people seem to lovingly care

About a tree,
That is said to be so harsh with its brutal winds
What with knocking things around, tearing things apart, but I guess it all depends

On a tree,
That gets in the way with its enormous roots breaking things down
And jamming up the earth while we all hang around

A tree,
That causes more pain than pleasure
But just for good measure
Let's look at the good and the bad
All of the aspects which can make one go mad
Oh wait what was it that we need
in order to breathe?
Oh yeah…

A tree:)
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