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Some things I wrote tonight.
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I got a couple...



All thats Left:

The time has come
The day of all to come
He gave his all
But didn't make it
On the cold dirt his body lie
Everyone trying to give him life
And before he gets a chance to say good-bye
Lonely his body die.


Nothing Wrong:

When the day was young
He woke up to a morn of devastation
No one left but the ones he loved
The sounds at the window
They've come for my beloved
They've entered
Left none alive
Lonely he stays
Sitting in the corner by himself
He takes the knife by the end
And then in a pool of red he lay.


Devastation

Woke up in the early morn
The room bathed of gold
Going to what was to be a day
A day in which no bad could come
When he reaaches his destination
He finds that the one he loves is gone
He mourns for hours
Friends cheer him back to his senses
He goes about his bent day
Until he finds that all of his hard work is destroyed
Falling deeper into a void of darkness
He lets go, He makes his decision
He goes...


These are some I've done over this last year...may seem kinda dark...dont know why i wrote them.
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Some things I wrote tonight. - by Turtle - 02-29-2004, 11:13 PM
Some things I wrote tonight. - by DragonLady23 - 03-01-2004, 04:50 PM
Some things I wrote tonight. - by DragonLady23 - 03-01-2004, 05:22 PM
Some things I wrote tonight. - by Turtle - 03-01-2004, 05:44 PM
Some things I wrote tonight. - by Wanksta - 03-02-2004, 12:02 AM
Some things I wrote tonight. - by DragonLady23 - 03-02-2004, 12:23 AM

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