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Some things I wrote tonight.
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"Broken Life"
Broken life,
Shattered just like a mirror,
Over a person she thought she loved.
Abuse from they, hurt more then any blade.
Piercing past the heart into the soul
Thousands of pieces,
Still refelcting the same person,
Crying thousands of times,
Showing pain in every image.


"New One"

An upset girl,
Laying on her bed,
Thinking of things,
Swirling in her head,
Wondering if she's worth it all,
To put up with all of the suffering,
To be with her boyfriend.

She loves him so,
Even though he believes otherwise,
Wishing she would be noticed,
By the one that supposedly truly loves her.

Keeping the pain in,
She waits around for all of life,
To see if the boy will notice her,
And love her,
The way she deserves,
Instead of all the abuse.

"Nameless"
Lost without a cause,
A hopeless fade,
Swirling around,
Hoping for a new beginning.
Reliving the harshest times,
That have happened over the years,
To get a better view,
For the next life.
Fading of the brightest,
Dulling of the shiniest,
Leads the life,
Of the person,
Without the soul.



I got bored so I wrote all of those. Took about 10 minutes for all of them together. They aren't my best, just I haven't written in awhile.
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Some things I wrote tonight. - by Turtle - 02-29-2004, 11:13 PM
Some things I wrote tonight. - by DragonLady23 - 03-01-2004, 04:50 PM
Some things I wrote tonight. - by DragonLady23 - 03-01-2004, 05:22 PM
Some things I wrote tonight. - by Turtle - 03-01-2004, 05:44 PM
Some things I wrote tonight. - by Wanksta - 03-02-2004, 12:02 AM
Some things I wrote tonight. - by DragonLady23 - 03-02-2004, 12:23 AM

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