11-15-2005, 11:38 PM
Hey, Rws and I have been working on this and we need some help.
The wind blows, the leaves fall
The crunch of leaves beneath your feet, I can't help but feel they're victims all
The chilly air and the chimney smoke
The wind whispers without note
The feeling of feathers, the wind pushes you as if there's something to gain
This brings forth a feeling I cannot evoke
For fall touches me deeply in a way I can not explain
As if looking directly into your loverâs eyes
It canât but hurt to say âGood-bye.â
We are willing for any revision you wish to make.
The wind blows, the leaves fall
The crunch of leaves beneath your feet, I can't help but feel they're victims all
The chilly air and the chimney smoke
The wind whispers without note
The feeling of feathers, the wind pushes you as if there's something to gain
This brings forth a feeling I cannot evoke
For fall touches me deeply in a way I can not explain
As if looking directly into your loverâs eyes
It canât but hurt to say âGood-bye.â
We are willing for any revision you wish to make.